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  • Opinion

    I think you wrote a fabulous evaluation, I like it how your very thorough with your explanations.
    • 01/05/2007
    • 00:49:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Suggestion

    If it was possible you should expand the amount of resources that you use, so that you are sure the numbers that you are getting are the same in another and you can get more perspective on an issue.
    • 01/05/2007
    • 00:46:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Lion king - heros

    You can easily lose marks for punctuation, you should fix it up. Build up your vocabulary "A hero's journey is primarily a journey to the center of yourself, an inner journey to wholeness and understanding" instead of saying journey three times change it to its synonyms to add variety to you work.
    • 01/05/2007
    • 00:43:03
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  • HIV/AIDS

    Instead of just listing what the facts are, be creative and explain a few ways you would help stop the spread of HIV/AIDS.
    • 01/05/2007
    • 00:35:40
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.