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Do not get exactly what you are trying to say
i am not sure exactly what your point is or what exactly the thesis is. You state the gods want to punish gilgamesh but you dont give any exact incident or detail as to why. you dont truely depict gilgamesh and the character that he was.i feel the article just sort of jumped around and doesnt actually contain a clear basis. You details and incidents need to be just a little clear.
- 20/10/2002
- 17:14:03
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