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  • Good

    Good essay, but could have used more credible sources
    • 20/03/2008
    • 00:30:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm...

    A bit less thank what you would expect from a 12th grader, but none the less, good try...
    • 20/03/2008
    • 00:27:06
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Bad essay

    Way too short with no structure and Wikipedia is not a credible source
    • 15/03/2008
    • 21:51:52
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Citations

    For an essay of this length, more citations would have made this essay more credible.
    • 17/04/2007
    • 20:40:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.