Course provided very little information on flat organizations but this paper helps clarify a little.
- 06/10/2006
- 11:58:04
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Many people are not aware of the "fat gene" and wonder why their weight yo-yos. Thank you for bringing that to light.
- 12/09/2006
- 20:34:40
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Having had weight loss surgery myself, I was able to relate with the writer of this essay. Good job at trying to describe the "pain" of being fat to those who have never experienced it.
- 12/09/2006
- 20:32:25
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This paper presented a lot of statistics with no sources to back it up.
- 12/09/2006
- 20:28:55
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Even though I am not a soap opera watcher myself, I found this essay interesting. It really makes the reader see a different side of soap operas then the typical fluff.
- 10/09/2006
- 17:20:32
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This essay is a prime example of the appeal to emotion tactic. It was very sweet and heart rending. Well done!
- 10/09/2006
- 17:17:38
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