User Details For: ShaTinCollege2007

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  • IB history project?

    Good IB style project although in order to achieve a top 7 all notes should be in continuous prose.
    • 24/11/2006
    • 05:50:04
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Different perspective

    Never thought of this essay title before, it's really interesting.
    • 18/11/2006
    • 19:36:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Perception

    "Theroy" is spelled theory this typo/spelling error in your title makes a big difference to how your essay (which is good) is percieved.
    • 18/11/2006
    • 19:15:42
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Layout

    Not sure about the layout, it's not very flowing. Points (in my opinion) need to be expanded more.
    • 17/11/2006
    • 04:06:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • One sided

    It is also important to remember the view of those who are applying for early admissions. Often they have worked v.v hard to get this far and to get accepted early is their dream.
    • 17/11/2006
    • 03:51:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Um...thought provoking

    This agrees with my general point of view although maybe a bit coloqual for an essay?
    • 17/11/2006
    • 03:35:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.