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Essay List
High school English class: Alienation
- 734 words (3 pages)
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Child Development: Letter to a future child about growth and development
- 1607 words (6 pages)
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"Noises Off" by Michael Frayn: Written vs. Dramatic vs. Visual - An analysis of comedy throughout the ages, world and genres
- 2044 words (8 pages)
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Dionysus Position Essay: Pagan Culture (w/focus on Dionysus)
- 940 words (4 pages)
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Lucian's "Alexander the False Prophet": Pagan Culture
- 918 words (4 pages)
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Ovid's "Art of Love": An essay response
- 1422 words (6 pages)
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Voltaire's "Candide": Response Paper
- 400 words (2 pages)
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Response to Michael Moore's "Bowling for Columbine" and book "Stupid White Men"
- 520 words (2 pages)
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Distractions Through Language - Cites: Deborah Tannen, Alison Lurie, Stuart Hirschberg and Margaret Atwood
- 1318 words (5 pages)
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Unity Through History - Cites: Bertolt Brecht, Kenneth M. Stampp, Mary Crow Dog and Richard Erdoes, Alice Walker, Huanani-Kay Trask,
- 1488 words (6 pages)
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Response to Garrett Hardin's article "Lifeboat Ethics: The Case against Helping the Poor."
- 501 words (2 pages)
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Neuronal Functions
- 1832 words (7 pages)
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Reaction Paper to Marilyn Frye's "Oppression" and Audre Lorde's "The Master's Tools Will Never Dismantle the Master's House"
- 339 words (1 pages)
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Feminism: An Ideology and Lifestyle
- 1752 words (7 pages)
- 119
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Charles Dickens vs. Melissa Bank - A Common Link?
- 546 words (2 pages)
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Comments List
Constructive Criticism for an Otherwise Great Essay
This essay was great! The only fix that I would suggest (were you to resubmit it, or someone else to learn from this one) would be to include a paragraph about why a family is NOT just blood relatives. I can't think of a specific example but I am sure that there are books, poems, etc out there where someone speaks of having a friend be so close that they are considered part of the family. Because this was the primary argument (that "family" does not just mean blood-related) I think this paragraph would greatly enhance the quality of the essay.- 14/12/2006
- 12:53:42
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Bluest Eye
This is a great essay! It was clear, concise and well thought out. Having already read the book I found this essay to be accurate in its representation of the novel. Great job!- 11/12/2006
- 15:26:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.