The author has very good references and content in the paper. The formatting might not have been the best for the paper though.
- 28/03/2007
- 15:11:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The author uses good analogies in the paper, has great content and also has great content.The author shows the link between critical thinking and language very well.
- 28/03/2007
- 15:03:24
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay has a great introduction, you are set up for the paper and what you are about to read. The content becomes lacking and there is no references to back up the information. It is really choppy, lacking in transitions.
- 27/03/2007
- 13:37:23
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I believe the user has a good grip on the content and the nature of the paper. The conclusion and introduction hold the paper together really well. The citations and references are used well.
- 27/03/2007
- 13:33:32
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I believe that the writer understood the assignment and the material based on the content. I do not believe that the introduction and conclusion mapped the paper out and held the paper together well.
- 27/03/2007
- 13:30:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is in a very logical format with a very well body. The content is great and the thoughts are held together very well with an introduction and a conclusion.
- 27/03/2007
- 13:27:29
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.