What a great essay! Speaking of thought provoking, you got my ol' thinking cap going. :) I never even thought of concept art before. Thanks!
- 13/02/2007
- 09:07:02
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The language in this essay is a bit informal and juvenile for a bachelors. As far as the other comments, you can be racist if you want to. In a paper, however, you have to be able to defend your opinions and points.
- 13/02/2007
- 09:04:58
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This is very to the point and specific, but I can still hear the author's voice. Good job!
- 13/02/2007
- 09:00:14
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I was unable to detect any of the author's personality in this piece. It was more like a bibliography.
- 13/02/2007
- 08:57:32
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This is a fantastic essay! It sounds like something from a book preface. It's easy to read and flows nicely. Unfortuantely, it didn't have what I was looking for, but it DID give me a few other things to think about. Thanks for submitting this!
- 09/02/2007
- 04:16:22
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