Hi you made a good attempt. All the headings are correct. Some information in some paragraphs belong under different headings and a few grammatical errors that could have been sorted by proof-reading. Good referencing.
- 09/05/2007
- 05:44:44
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Great Essay. Wrote excellently. Great list of references. Well done.
- 09/04/2007
- 12:14:53
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Well written essay. Great amount of information contained in it. Pity the references are all web based and two years old. Excellent.
- 09/04/2007
- 12:07:30
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Great Essay. You must be a genius been only in the tenth grade. Excellent.
- 06/04/2007
- 15:32:24
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Great essay with great references.
- 05/04/2007
- 17:17:14
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Great essay with good list of references.
- 04/04/2007
- 09:09:23
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Short and to the point. Well referenced. Good Work.
- 03/04/2007
- 14:45:06
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An enjoyable and informed read. Great essay.
- 03/04/2007
- 14:41:46
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Nice References and found very helpful and interesting.
- 30/03/2007
- 11:39:56
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The essay was of huge benefit to me. Thanks.
- 03/03/2007
- 23:49:13
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Well organized and detailed essay. Great stuff.
- 03/03/2007
- 23:40:57
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I found this essay very helpful.
- 03/03/2007
- 00:34:48
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Great Reference included.
- 05/02/2007
- 03:43:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.