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  • Great Information!

    This essay has great information. I truly enjoyed reading the essay and I learned a lot from the information. This is one election that has some great historical facts involved in it. Great job!
    • 29/11/2008
    • 13:22:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    You do a great job of referring to Marlow's theory o help support your information. I recommend using a reference list at the end so that readers can easily refer to the data that is cited. The way you refer to well known company's such as GM and McDonald's helps solidify your information as well. Great job.
    • 29/11/2008
    • 13:14:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Facts

    You have provided great factual data to support your information. Statistics like this bring great value to your essay. great job!
    • 29/11/2008
    • 13:05:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Entertaining

    Very entertaining essay. I like the humor.
    • 27/11/2008
    • 04:35:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    Good essay. Well written and flowed very well. Not sure if the paragraph structure, or lack thereof, is due to the site or is what the author submitted, but it makes the paper more difficult to read when it is not structured into paragraphs.
    • 27/11/2008
    • 04:28:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Information

    Great topic and some great information. I think the paper is well written. My only issue is that the author only uses the ideas and thoughts of others and doesn't put any personal thoughts or opinions in the paper. The whole paper is basically (or should be) cited.
    • 15/06/2008
    • 12:35:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Short but a great analysis

    This is a short essay but still provides a good, and in my opinion accurate, analysis of motivation and how it is achieved.
    • 15/06/2008
    • 12:28:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    The author does a great job of systematically walking the reader through the course that was taken and explaining each step in the process and how each step furthered the authors knowledge.
    • 15/06/2008
    • 12:17:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good info

    Some great information and an interesting topic. The essay could use some organization and could be improved upon with some proof reading. Sometimes hard to read due to run-on sentences.
    • 15/06/2008
    • 12:03:29
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done!

    This essay is very well written. The author does a great job of stating the facts and avoiding opinions. Great substance and very well organized.
    • 15/06/2008
    • 11:57:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.