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  • Personal

    this experience essay seems a little to personal to be of any great value or significance to others. However, the main point is portrayed and developed. Organization of the document could have been improved.
    • 20/11/2002
    • 21:04:35
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    the essay gets to the point and supports the claims with textual evidence, but could use some work on organization
    • 20/11/2002
    • 21:01:38
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.