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"Looking For Alibrandi" written by Melina Marchetta: Why does Josie want to escape her Italian background?
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Spiritual Pathways
- 477 words (2 pages)
- 25
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"Dances with wolves"
- 647 words (3 pages)
- 26
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Creative Writing
This essay is a job well done. One tip could have been not to start every paragraph with the same structure. eg. The second word i would use to describe myself is:.... You could have started a paragraph a bit differently. Overall, it is a good essay, that I would use if need be. =]- 13/11/2007
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