Its really hard to follow your essay, I suggest using better linking words such as "furthermore" rather than "Also".
- 21/03/2007
- 18:11:30
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Your essay flows well and links to next points well, over all its good.
- 21/03/2007
- 16:28:57
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Wow, thats great info u have in this essay but make sure that it doesn't get sooo detailed that it just drags on pointlessly cause its easy to go off topic then... but great info!
- 21/03/2007
- 16:26:33
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