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  • Good Essay

    This essay is pretty good, it has detailed answers.One thing that I would say that could make this essay better would be to take the credit card into prospectus of a businessman/woman.For example, if you study business studies at GCSE/A-LEVELS you could have written more and get more of the bonus marks that many examiners give.Other than that, GOOD WORK =)
    • 08/04/2007
    • 10:25:22
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Parents

    Just so you know, many parents since 1994 have dressed there baby girls in sky blue, and baby boys also in sky blue and other various unisex colours.This was a survey taken in 1993 by Cambridge university; a few years after a womans rights activist demanded that her daughter was to be a footballer, and her son is allowed to take up dance without social distribution.
    • 05/04/2007
    • 12:38:13
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    I don't think you mentioned this, but before/during/ and just after world war one Hitler was not a democrat, he was nothing more than a soldier, and after world war one, he chose to run for leader of Germany. In 1924 Hitler, was still only entering politics, and only had just left the army, his campaign was excavated 3 years before world war two, after his impressive speech in Berlin, Germany.
    • 05/04/2007
    • 12:35:06
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Thats alot, wheres the intro?

    Jesus, this essay is very well detailed, I have one small problem, I recommend that you include an introduction to your work, at the beginning of this piece, there was no introduction on Daphne Du Maurier. It simply went straight into her life.
    • 05/04/2007
    • 12:31:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good notes

    Well Done, I think these notes are very well written and quite informative for GCSE - A LEVEL exams. Though some of the notes are not needed in any kind of exam, it is still good to see that you have taken the time and care to make sure the information is relatively correct.Good Work! =)
    • 05/04/2007
    • 12:29:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Beix, why did you submit this twice?

    Though I find this essay to be well worded and informative, I have also noticed that this essay has been posted twice, but under two different titles. You should only submit one essay once.
    • 04/04/2007
    • 14:51:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.