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  • Eh..

    mayb you could use more adjectives to spice it up a little bit. i know that it can get a little blahzay for the teacher reading these essays, and only incourages him/her to deduct more points from seeing the same thing over and over. variety is good! :)
    • 11/11/2002
    • 18:58:29
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.