This made Romeo and Juliet so much easier to understand. =]
- 20/04/2008
- 23:18:20
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I like the way you view feminism
- 16/04/2008
- 22:53:52
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I had fun reading this piece =]
- 16/04/2008
- 22:53:08
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Good point of view
- 16/04/2008
- 15:22:31
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Although it can use a little bit more detail
- 16/04/2008
- 15:17:17
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This is pretty good for a 10th grader.
- 16/04/2008
- 13:22:58
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Well written essay!
- 18/12/2007
- 19:51:56
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You might want to edit the essay because you wrote the whole thing all over again after the first 6 paragraphs.
- 28/04/2007
- 16:23:09
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Not all that of a good job. It is an okay piece of work but I believe that a student in Grade 12 would need to do better than this to get a good more.
- 14/04/2007
- 12:01:55
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I read the Giver in grade 7...but this is not really an essay, rather it is more like a summary. Well, even though it is a summary it is pretty well written. Good job! =D
- 14/04/2007
- 11:57:41
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Overall, an OK essay. Not something very great. The essay was pretty informative but I do think that it should have something more. It would make a brilliant essay if it had some transition sentences, etc. Overall if was an Ok essay.
- 13/04/2007
- 16:02:39
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This one little topic has so many thoughts and explanations. I would find it pretty hard to write an essay this long on one little topic. Good job! =D
- 13/04/2007
- 15:46:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I support your argument =D
- 11/04/2007
- 19:19:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.