repetitive and bad grammar
- 21/11/2002
- 14:19:01
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great Job!!
- 19/11/2002
- 15:27:11
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The essay is informative but the thesis is not made clear. The essay starts off about Karate and then moves to various other martial art forms.
- 19/11/2002
- 15:20:09
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
There are tons of gramatical errors in this.
- 16/11/2002
- 23:56:08
- Score: 12 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
The name of an opera should be in Italics, not quotes. And the belief that Mozart "struggled throughout his short life" is a myth. He was rich, partied constantly, and was one of the most famous and powerful people of his time. Be careful where you get your information.
- 15/11/2002
- 09:39:38
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.