This is a very personal essay. Otherwise some of the concepts brought up are very important.
- 02/08/2009
- 06:27:51
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The whole "typical worn out story of a forty something year old man waking up and realising that life has not turned out the way he planned and follows him as he sets around trying to change it" is crucial to the success of the movie.
- 14/03/2009
- 20:48:31
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In bibliography, for websites try to add "date last updated" or something along those lines. This way, should there be an error, ie some idiot with the wrong info on wikipedia they can check it out.
- 14/03/2009
- 20:36:38
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good information, although it isn't actually an essay.
- 01/03/2009
- 04:13:44
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My only criticism is to prevent bias; you referred to self sacrifice as a poor practice. It is a personal matter. Do not opinionated it in essays.
- 01/03/2009
- 04:11:40
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Some of the paragraphs should be grouped so they are more than 3-4 lines. otherwise fair effort.
- 12/03/2008
- 01:24:11
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If only I could have found this last year! This is really well formatted stuff. it contains statistics as well.
- 01/03/2008
- 23:30:25
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The content is solid except in some cases there are one sentence paragraphs, these need to be worked on.
- 09/05/2007
- 15:02:09
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