You've definitely explained well one of the main problems in todays high school/college era - the use of new technology on students for cheating in exams/tests. It is very well written, you must have got a good mark for it!
- 24/06/2007
- 10:21:54
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Great work!! You've definitely done your research!! I would have liked to seen a possible extension on the introduction, however, you've done really well and should be proud of what you submitted!
- 09/06/2007
- 00:32:49
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I would usually go with "quality not quantity" but this defeats that WITH STYLE!You've shown a great - no AWESOME - introduction and conclusion. Your body paragraphs were extensive and persuasive enough to keep the reader enticed in your work.The use of the parting question "Then What?" is great too, as it keeps people thinking after they have finished your essay, which is one of the main goals of an essay writer.its definitely shown that you have done your research. VERY WELL DONE!
- 07/06/2007
- 06:06:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.