This paper has a lot of insight and information. I learned that not everyone was brought up in a diverse setting. The paper needs grammatical "tweakings" in order to shine the way it should.
- 02/11/2009
- 21:34:57
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Great information. This paper will give anyone who is not totally familiar with the company, a lot of information.
- 02/11/2009
- 21:30:49
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This paper was well researched and has an abundance of information
- 23/08/2009
- 19:11:32
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However, the first person should be removed.
- 23/08/2009
- 19:06:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I would change the introduction a bit and add a stronger conclusion. Good article
- 30/05/2009
- 09:16:34
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Overall good information; however, the use of personal pronouns should be eliminated as wells as starting sentences with it is. The information should be arranged differently in order for it to obtain a better flow.
- 30/05/2009
- 09:10:58
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The second sentence seems contradictory.
- 07/04/2009
- 20:20:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This seems to be more of a personal opinion instead of a professional one.
- 05/04/2009
- 21:30:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I would have introduced who loverboy is on the first paragraph instead of the second
- 05/04/2009
- 21:28:36
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The paper needs a conclusion
- 04/04/2009
- 21:06:42
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The title is personal perspective paper. This paper, in my opinion, did not have enough personal opinion. It was based on other's personal perspective
- 10/02/2009
- 21:11:07
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This is an eye opener for parents
- 10/02/2009
- 21:08:10
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This is a short essay but contains good information. The information is to the point and allows those of us who are unaware of ADHD to understand it easy. The only constructive feedback that I have is not to star a sentence with "There are".
- 10/02/2009
- 20:38:17
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This is a good essay; however I would refrain from starting paragraphs with prepositions such as "if".
- 10/02/2009
- 20:35:15
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This essay is written in a clear manner. Easy to understand
- 10/02/2009
- 20:33:24
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This paper was written well and contains lots of information.
- 10/02/2009
- 20:29:18
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The paper has lot of information, but it needs in-text citation.
- 14/12/2008
- 11:58:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Needs a little more substance
- 11/12/2008
- 15:19:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The critique of the movie and show of inaccuracies was well detailed
- 11/12/2008
- 15:11:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well written with tons of good information
- 09/12/2008
- 14:44:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out, organized and written !
- 21/11/2008
- 02:46:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The books seem like interesting reads. However the comparison between the two run into each other. Needs to be more organized
- 21/11/2008
- 02:41:13
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Organized in a well mannered. Informative
- 17/11/2008
- 12:50:52
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I am not sure if this is part of a larger paper. It needs an introduction and conclusion
- 17/11/2008
- 12:07:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay is too general; however it is a good start.Although it is a middle school essay it could have more details.
- 17/11/2008
- 12:04:22
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The paper is well organized; however I would cut down on the personal pronouns.
- 17/11/2008
- 11:58:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
For those of us who have not been part of the marine corps, this is good material
- 25/07/2008
- 15:59:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great article, I would not use wikipedia as a reference.
- 25/07/2008
- 15:55:10
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This essay has good information, however besides being too short, it uses too many personal pronouns
- 24/07/2008
- 12:17:21
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a good topic; however, the actual essay was too short. The essay needs to be elaborated on
- 24/07/2008
- 08:57:32
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The paper has the right information, needs to be more organized.
- 17/07/2008
- 17:02:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good Information on Split Rock
- 05/05/2008
- 20:13:51
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Well Prepared and organized.
- 05/05/2008
- 19:58:31
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well prepared and written
- 05/05/2008
- 19:46:19
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Even without having done the simulation, I was able to visualize it.
- 23/12/2007
- 08:52:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
My interest was kept throughout the paper
- 23/12/2007
- 08:50:08
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Contents of the paper was well prepared and organized
- 09/12/2007
- 11:08:31
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great essay with fantastic points. Very informative
- 09/12/2007
- 11:05:27
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Points well defined. Organization of the paper was good.
- 20/10/2007
- 13:50:32
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well detailed and organized.
- 20/10/2007
- 11:56:10
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well written paper. Thorough and complete.
- 23/09/2007
- 13:53:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great source of information.
- 23/09/2007
- 13:51:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great points on what is going on on the workplace.
- 23/09/2007
- 13:50:23
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was an informative essay. It would be interesting to see an opposite approach to the essay. Could the negative impact change if the programming change ? Well written essay
- 09/09/2007
- 10:14:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Body of the paper is very informative, but the conclusion is too short.
- 28/08/2007
- 19:44:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The contents is good and easy to read. Could use a little more detail.
- 28/08/2007
- 18:57:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well organized. Great flow of the paper.
- 28/08/2007
- 18:52:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Contents were good. For APA purposes, the paper had too many pronouns. If the pronouns were taken away, the paper would flow better.
- 28/08/2007
- 18:50:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good concept and format. May want to eliminate the use of pronouns.
- 25/08/2007
- 09:29:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
There is too much use of personal pronouns. APA style essays can't have this many pronouns.
- 25/08/2007
- 09:25:35
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The concept and idea of the paper are good, but there is too much use of personal pronouns.
- 25/08/2007
- 09:23:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This flows more as a PowerPoint presentation. Not too detailed as far as being an essay.
- 25/08/2007
- 09:21:43
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This paper flows very easy. Good job.
- 25/08/2007
- 09:19:58
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great job. Good flow.
- 25/08/2007
- 09:10:45
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great essay.
- 12/08/2007
- 18:25:51
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.