Your style is great, although I would like to see a bit more of clarity. Also one mistake that came up to me again and again was when you were comparing the books you said "in A Doll House and Death and the Maiden" instead of just the one book/play you were talking about
- 26/11/2007
- 13:35:05
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Nice essay. You did a good job with it. Just a suggestion, but u might want to organize your essay a bit better.
- 03/09/2007
- 09:00:48
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What he/she says here is absolutely true. Humans are moving towards greater technology, yet at the same time are ensuring their destruction.
- 01/09/2007
- 11:08:39
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Nice job with the essay. It is true that the book has a lot of hidden symbolism in it and you have brought it out.
- 01/09/2007
- 11:06:36
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You have written this essay very well. All the paragraphs come together and are related to each other. As ungalfo said you have captured the tone also.
- 01/09/2007
- 09:38:00
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I am now studying WW@, and this essay was very insightful. I agree with you that Hitler was effective, but in the wrong way.
- 01/09/2007
- 09:35:09
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Great Job. I know I'm going to get a hundred on that test!
- 01/09/2007
- 09:33:36
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Ok job. You need to focus on bringing your paragraphs together and relating them. Besides that it was an interesting read.
- 01/09/2007
- 09:30:40
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Besides minor flaws in the essay, your comparison was very well thought out and shows a lot of great writing skill. Good Job.
- 01/09/2007
- 09:28:24
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The author of this essay has researched well into the subject and delivers it in very nice sentence structure. Great Information.
- 19/08/2007
- 10:50:51
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This essay was so so, a lot of the arguments you have presented in this have become outdated and no longer problems. The Firefox paragraph was good though.
- 19/08/2007
- 10:46:16
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I loved this essay all the way from the beginning to the end. Its a bittersweet romantic tale of a guy who's not a nerd, but has never gotten a girl before. I recommend everyone to read this!!!
- 19/08/2007
- 10:42:17
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You are right in assuming the insensitivities that Walmart creates while conducting their business like wages. However this is a business world, and when it comes to business, Walmart has great prices and great customer service hence making it one of the highest earning companies. Great job on the essay
- 19/08/2007
- 10:34:40
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You had a very detailed and expressive essay. It would be better, however if you rose the standard of English in this. But great job overall.
- 19/08/2007
- 10:29:21
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