Could use some paragraphing. However you did make some nice points. Also, a works cited page would be beneficial to have with an essay such as this.
- 03/09/2007
- 07:39:05
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These are all thought provoking and well written responses. Nice Job, however the fact that you are your only cited source is a little troubling.
- 28/08/2007
- 07:40:53
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I bet my USH teacher, Mr Turreff would love this essay! Although he may not see there being much of a comparison.
- 25/08/2007
- 17:04:13
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