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Confusing but OK
I don't really understand the format of this essay and what "Contention"s are, but it looks good otherwise. Nice strong language and a good flow, as well as lots of information. Great job!- 27/09/2007
- 13:15:27
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Very Nice Essay
The essay uses great language, and I love how it pulls in the reading with the first line. It feels like a friendly essay, as if you know the writer personally and he's explaining it to you like a friend. This is great for a Point Of View type of essay.- 26/08/2007
- 12:30:35
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