You definitely put in a lot of effort here! Great Job!
- 12/09/2007
- 05:18:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is very technical but the structure itself could be better. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading this.
- 12/09/2007
- 05:01:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a detailed yet interesting essay. Good job.
- 12/09/2007
- 04:58:39
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Reasonable essay, however, the structure can be improved and a BIBLIOGRAPHY is needed.
- 12/09/2007
- 01:49:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good essay and it was a pleasant read. Overall it is very informative. However, in text referencing should be there especially if it this is university level text. Regardless of this, this essay is still well structured and written.
- 11/09/2007
- 03:01:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay contains a reasonable amount of factual information. However, there is some unwanted repetition. Overall, this is a well written essay.
- 11/09/2007
- 02:57:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.