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Essay List

• Jazz: Urban and Rural Reactions In the 1920s

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• A Brief Critique of Alexander Pope's "Essay on Man"

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• The Effect the Media has on Women's Self Image

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• Overall great

  Overall, this essay is pretty solid. The use of clever and varying vocabulary really helps the essay. The only negative point I see is in the second paragraph, where you seem to use I, me, and we. If you were allowed that is fine, however. This topic could be expanded upon greatly, but this essay offers some basic ideas to get you started.
  • 16/10/2007
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