You explained you point and didnt carry on about it good job.
- 23/12/2002
- 18:15:34
- Score: 17 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
Well written I enjoyed it thouroughly
- 21/12/2002
- 12:31:20
- Score: 24 out of 27 people found this comment useful.
You did a great job of writing this essay it definately informs everyone that reads it and it is so correct.. People who use windows feel like they dont have a choice because they are so computer illiterate its just like with AOL people dont know how to use anything else but AOL and little do they know their are other ISP's out their....good job
- 21/12/2002
- 12:22:48
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Your essay should have been set up into paragraphs but i found that the essay was very informative.. good job
- 21/12/2002
- 12:14:12
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Dont Plagerize folks we will catch you keep your trash off our site!
- 20/12/2002
- 20:39:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Plagerizm is for people who cant write essays dont be dumb and keep your crap of our sie
- 20/12/2002
- 20:33:57
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You didnt take sides on this essay and that is what i look for your grammar was okay and you broke the essay into paragraphs ... good job
- 19/12/2002
- 22:10:48
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I agrre that you should have taken the time to break into paragraphs because if i were a teacher i would have taken off points for it not being in paragraphs....but never the less the essay was good
- 19/12/2002
- 21:59:54
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Nice essaypoint takenunderstood clearly
- 19/12/2002
- 21:39:06
- Score: 22 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
You knew what you were talking about and that is commendable.....good job
- 18/12/2002
- 16:38:59
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
I dont know why people dont like this essay I feel it has both sides views and states its point i would have given it a 84%
- 18/12/2002
- 16:23:59
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Is this about trenches or about war or what either way this is a very poor esay!
- 18/12/2002
- 16:04:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
What an emagination ... I think you could compare class to anything realy because everything requires supplys and test and things like that in some way or another
- 18/12/2002
- 16:00:44
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You didnt explain too well you just kept on going and going you didnt use any indention in your paragraphs and i though that you didnt do too good on trying to keep the reader interested in the essay.
- 18/12/2002
- 15:54:31
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You definately read the book good Job
- 18/12/2002
- 15:45:23
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I took a class and I learned all about John Locke and everything you said is correct....good Job!
- 18/12/2002
- 15:42:19
- Score: 11 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
That was a wonderful essay I enjoyed it . You realy did good. good job
- 18/12/2002
- 15:36:50
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I agree with Panzer you jumped around way too much it was like flash back and flash forward and it was crazy. and the paragraphs were all grouped together
- 18/12/2002
- 15:32:09
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Nice Job and explination I feel that people will understand this essay with no problem ... good job
- 18/12/2002
- 15:20:03
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
poor grammar I dont know who this man is all i know is he is a slave that liked to learn there was very little infor in this essay.
- 18/12/2002
- 15:08:36
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You did a nice job.
- 17/12/2002
- 19:03:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice Job all points maid , maid sence good job
- 17/12/2002
- 18:44:03
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
you need to view both sides of the fence though. like gangs wearing gang colors and starting fights but i do agree with your view. good job
- 17/12/2002
- 18:41:28
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good job you sum up all the points of argon good job
- 17/12/2002
- 18:39:09
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Short and Sweet . Nice Job
- 17/12/2002
- 18:32:27
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
You did a good job about telling the story but I think you told the whole story. but it was okay
- 17/12/2002
- 18:29:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Although I havent read the book I feel that you have given me enough information about it to where i know the general idea of it . good job
- 17/12/2002
- 18:27:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I feel the essay is confussing but maybe it is due to the fact that I am a mail. But I feel that you gave plenty of supporting evidence and listed details also.
- 17/12/2002
- 18:23:44
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
You did good with stating your point but you need more evidence and facts about it.
- 17/12/2002
- 18:18:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you describe things. I bet your father would be proud.
- 17/12/2002
- 18:14:48
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Im glad that you knew what you were talking about and you wernt just rambling on!!!!! good job
- 17/12/2002
- 18:10:58
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You did okay on stating your point but you dont have much information on it. You could have included more information. But you did okay
- 15/12/2002
- 18:28:20
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was to breif and you were just rambling on with very few points made .... You could have done better
- 15/12/2002
- 18:24:08
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You explained your point but I found it misleading that you said that John Locke helped him with the preable. Yes Jefferson did use ideas from John Locke "Life, Liberty, Land" but no John Locke did not help him write the preable you may have ment that but it was not clear in your essay.
- 15/12/2002
- 18:18:47
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
somewhat breif you get your point across though.
- 15/12/2002
- 14:23:24
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Nice Job you didn't take sides and you knew what you were talking about....2 thumbs up
- 08/12/2002
- 14:29:44
- Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Nice Work I had no idea thanks for informing me! ....2 thumbs up
- 08/12/2002
- 14:23:35
- Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
You really knew what you were talking about it is so true. "Power Corrupts , absolute power corrupts absolutly" ...2 thumbs up.
- 08/12/2002
- 14:11:03
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You know what you are talking about ....2 thumbs up.
- 08/12/2002
- 14:04:23
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
You used alot of details but to a person like me it made no sence....it might be good I dont know ill give you a :| for your efforts
- 08/12/2002
- 13:58:01
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Detailed but not much to it....
- 07/12/2002
- 20:07:58
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You made me learn alot thanx.....good Job
- 07/12/2002
- 19:58:22
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Nice job with facts but I would recommend keeping all of your views out and stating more of the facts and if your going to use opinions use some from other peopla and not just your own but sill,.....good job
- 07/12/2002
- 19:54:30
- Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
Lots of info and you also share your views on things too....2 thumbs up
- 07/12/2002
- 19:49:06
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.