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  • Great

    Very good work with strong arguments.Very interesting.
    • 12/04/2009
    • 11:44:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    Good and interesting and very descriptive essay.
    • 08/04/2009
    • 11:34:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very interesting and good essay.
    • 08/04/2009
    • 11:33:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Very good! It was a very descriptive essay and one can learn a lot of new things from it!
    • 08/04/2009
    • 11:32:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    A Very Interesting and descriptive text. Well Done
    • 08/03/2009
    • 20:04:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    Very descriptive.Good with sources.
    • 08/03/2009
    • 12:51:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Oh

    Very touching. I think I am going to read the book.
    • 04/02/2009
    • 13:22:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm

    Good arguments. Never seen it from this perspective before. But I still do not agree with you. But good to find new good arguments to be prepared against.
    • 31/01/2009
    • 11:07:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Good informative text and good references. Very good.
    • 31/01/2009
    • 11:04:16
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Good essay with good fast-pace information.
    • 26/01/2009
    • 00:37:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    Very messed up. You should look through it and remove some messed up things that occurs when you copy and paste!Otherwise a good and informative essay.
    • 26/01/2009
    • 00:34:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Geat!

    Good essay with a lot of information! Also the many references you have in the end helped me since I also looked into some of them and found even more information!
    • 09/01/2009
    • 08:19:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice!

    Great information with a nice structure!
    • 09/01/2009
    • 08:18:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    Thanks, you saved me a lot of work! I looked all over Internet for JUST this kind of information!
    • 09/01/2009
    • 08:17:16
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    A very good essay with a lot of information given in a quite fast pace.
    • 09/01/2009
    • 08:15:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ooh come on

    it was a good and useful essay but can anyone ever learn to NOT JUST COPY AND PASTE TABLES! its very annoying trying to read off!
    • 09/11/2008
    • 15:49:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well

    while not good 12th grade standards i found it quite useful and therefore should not get bad credit. I am in the International Baccalaureate programme year 1 (meaning 11th grader)
    • 09/11/2008
    • 15:47:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    pretty good information, but please, when you want to upload an essay, don't just copy and paste a past work....because your tables are messed up and i can not read them.
    • 27/09/2008
    • 00:52:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Good evaluated with different ideas. Useful information
    • 22/09/2008
    • 09:15:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    Great Job. Defenetly A+
    • 22/09/2008
    • 08:56:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    It was a Very good and professional essay. I learned many things from it. Thank you
    • 11/09/2008
    • 14:22:08
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    A very good and interesting essay. Good and summarized information for everyone who wants to know the basics about fungus.
    • 31/08/2008
    • 12:23:30
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    It was a good text and on a good level. The only thing that was not very good about your text is that when you do copy and paste an old text, look through it again because the diseases in the beginning are almost unreadable.Good Job
    • 28/08/2008
    • 07:56:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Quite OK

    It was quite informative, but you should fix the layout of your text because it is annoying to read it when the distances between the sentences is big. You should also have a conclusion and introduction. Otherwise it was ok
    • 28/08/2008
    • 07:53:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not very good

    This essay was a bit strange in the design. You had no introduction or anything, and your English was not the best - "Then the diaphragm and then". It was very short and you just came up with some theories. You also made some mistakes in writing the essay because some letters does not make sense; "“hic”". You should at least have checked your essay once more before uploading it.
    • 27/08/2008
    • 01:55:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Bones?

    why is the title "bones in the human body"? It was mainly about muscles. Besides, i did not find this essay very useful because you already have to know quite a lot biology to understand it and if you know quite a lot biology you probably already know this because you will find even more and better information just searching in Wikipedia.
    • 24/08/2008
    • 01:48:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Good essay with many points. Looking at it from two perspectives and giving sources for the arguments were really good as well. It would have been even better if you somehow had made it more clear why we should not try cloning for now...kind of a summary.
    • 15/08/2008
    • 07:53:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    It's a quite good and simple explanation of mitosis, but since we are talikng about mitosis you might want to explain meiosis as well.Since you had a little intro before going to interphase, you could have a small conclusion as well.Otherwise it was very good. Easy to understand.
    • 09/08/2008
    • 04:55:00
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I do not agree

    Arguments for why this is not true.1. If you have studied modern biology, you should know that the outer part of the skin is not connected to any blood vessels and it has therefore no intake of nutrition which is essential for living and therefore the outer part of the skin des not live. It is also these cells that falls off when you touch something. Therefore, your GameCube is filled with thosands of dead cells. Lets say you accidentally cut yourself and a lot of blood was spilled on your Gamecube. Then, your Gamecube would have had living organisms on it for a whiile, but because of the fact that for cells to live they need to have a steady intake of nutrition. Since bloodcells are dependent on our mouth and the digestie system in order to get nutrition, your bloodcells would have died in yhe matter of a few hours...unless you somehow gave nutrition to your bloodcells. Your Gamecube is thefore not alive because it does not have living oganismns at all.Besides, your living organisms need to respirate and excreete as well. Does your Gamecube do that?If your memory card indeed had grown in size, i would have agreed to that statement. But does an iPod 30 gigabye with no information stored in it weigh less than an iPod 30 gigabyte filled with music, pictures and movies? No. Then your memory card is not growing.Another thing is that you memory cards that fall in love are tranfering data...not reprodusing.It was an amusing essay, but with many flaws in its arguments.I am sorry if I have some accidental spelling mistakes
    • 03/08/2008
    • 04:53:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.