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  • Well written

    This is a good book report for junior high. Good job.
    • 08/08/2003
    • 08:53:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs inro

    The introduction is weak, you need to write a stronge introduction. It will make the paper flow better and not sound like the answer to a question.
    • 08/08/2003
    • 08:51:29
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Disorganized

    This must have been the first draft to the essay. It has good ideas, and I can tell where you want to go, but it has no depth.This is a good first draft.
    • 16/09/2002
    • 23:53:47
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Written like a journal entry

    This is a good, well written journal entry. I don't think this would serve well as an essay for any class, but I do think that it has the ability to stimulate and provide ideas for other writers.
    • 13/09/2002
    • 13:54:07
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.