This is a good book report for junior high. Good job.
- 08/08/2003
- 08:53:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The introduction is weak, you need to write a stronge introduction. It will make the paper flow better and not sound like the answer to a question.
- 08/08/2003
- 08:51:29
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This must have been the first draft to the essay. It has good ideas, and I can tell where you want to go, but it has no depth.This is a good first draft.
- 16/09/2002
- 23:53:47
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This is a good, well written journal entry. I don't think this would serve well as an essay for any class, but I do think that it has the ability to stimulate and provide ideas for other writers.
- 13/09/2002
- 13:54:07
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.