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  • Grammatical Errors

    The grammatical errors in this paper show either lack of care and/or poor skills for professed level. Subject is covered in superficial manner also.
    • 10/07/2010
    • 14:33:05
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  • Where is the reference page?

    Where is the required reference page?
    • 30/06/2010
    • 12:56:06
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  • Citing errors and grammatical errors

    Check citations more carefully. Also, there seems to be some trouble with conflicts such as your sentence, "Therefore these examples clearly identifies the three domains are interrelated." This should be, "Therefore, these examples clearly identify that the three domains are interrelated." Furthermore, the word identify does not really seem the appropriate word, illustrate would be more appropriate. This is just one example. Running the paper through a grammar checker would have helped."
    • 26/06/2009
    • 10:09:18
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  • Good job

    Great job at this education level. Impressive that you included a bibliography.
    • 10/02/2009
    • 18:32:25
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  • Content & Grammar

    This is an outstanding paper for grade 12. Keep up the good work. I am amazed at the job of citations which are better than many college level writers produce. I do not see the reference list though. And be just a bit more careful with punctuation in complex sentences.
    • 28/01/2009
    • 10:50:09
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  • Citations

    This is a pretty good essay. However, there are a lot of references to facts that are not cited. There are too many facts referenced in this essay that are not common knowledge and should be properly cited.
    • 28/01/2009
    • 10:39:01
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  • Content & Grammar

    The thesis and content of this essay is very good. However, the grammar and sentence structure is hard to follow at times.For example the following sentence: "Science is meant to be objective and unbiased. It should be free of values and discover the truths about what it is studying." What exactly is meant by free of values?Another example is this sentence: "However, it is integral in this to debate to understand exactly the major features of a science, in order to judge if psychology is in fact one." Does this mean "...in this debate""...; in this to debate in order to understand"; and "... is, in fact, one." what?
    • 28/01/2009
    • 10:31:47
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  • Content & Ideas

    The content of the essay is pretty good, for first or second year college (pre associates). However, citations are not appropriate for psychological works.
    • 28/01/2009
    • 10:18:43
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  • Good work

    Good work, but where are your references? I am interested in reading them.
    • 08/12/2008
    • 07:48:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Grade?

    For the education level this paper has too many grammatical errors and poor sentence structure in places. This paper would not have received an A in any of my classes.
    • 20/11/2008
    • 06:52:00
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  • Cite Facts

    There are some great facts listed in this essay. Good job on research. However, facts that are not common knowledge must have a source listed.
    • 01/11/2008
    • 14:29:04
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  • Cite Facts

    Much information in this essay should be cited (as fact). Other information in this essay is stated as fact and is not fact. Careful.
    • 01/11/2008
    • 14:21:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ranting or Rating

    I am Hispanic. And I have a biracial child. It is in protection of this child that these things bother me. You did nothing more than prove my point.
    • 22/10/2008
    • 17:15:02
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  • Rate on Opinion

    One should not rate the quality of an essay on his or her opinion of the author's view.
    • 22/10/2008
    • 17:12:42
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