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  • Would be better

    Although I agree with everyone else who said that the essay is not finished yet and needs some work, it may not be as bad if it had a introduction and a conclusion. The reader is left hanging, and also has no clue where this is coming from.
    • 08/01/2003
    • 21:45:16
    • Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.