No references used to back up your information.
- 13/12/2008
- 19:37:00
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I really liked this paper. You used extensive references and backed up your information quite well.
- 13/12/2008
- 19:29:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
My 12 year old could write a better essay! This is just terrible lacks information, very repetitive and no sources!
- 30/11/2008
- 12:45:19
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It's interesting but the sources throws it all off!
- 28/09/2008
- 16:21:28
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Great back-up of sources used!
- 28/09/2008
- 16:16:26
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Your paper is good however, be careful with the spelling. I like the idea that you wrote on this issue, this is really becoming a problem for the youth as well.
- 05/03/2008
- 22:05:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very interesting, informative and well written paper.
- 05/03/2008
- 21:57:05
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This paper is not bad for a 300 word max paper. I do suggest that you stop using wikipedia since it is no longer a site that can be used by universities. Also be careful with plagiarism, try using your own thoughts or paraphrase and cite.
- 03/02/2008
- 10:26:53
- Score: 10 out of 13 people found this comment useful.