Very well done on the content, however there was a lot of comma usage. Cut half the commas out (there were commas in almost every sentence) and it is an A+
- 08/05/2003
- 01:45:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay has some grammatical errors and isn't clear in explaining certain parts. Unique, that's about all I can say.
- 12/12/2002
- 00:26:18
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The content of the essay wasn't bad, but the paper was full of filler words. It didn't have much flow, and needs to be condensed a little. I only found a few spelling errors, most of the errors were grammer errors.
- 11/12/2002
- 23:23:35
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay was written very well, with only a handfull of grammatical errors. It is also nice to have the end notes as well as a bibliography, nice work.
- 09/12/2002
- 21:23:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.