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  • Refreshingly good

    I find so many essays on this website crap people submit just to get super status to read other people's crap. This essay was well written with clearly thought out ideas. I thank the author for restoring my faith in cheathouse submissions.
    • 27/02/2003
    • 19:21:57
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Extremely informative

    I actually sat back and read the whole essay and I was very captivated. This essay covered all the points of the salem trials and also was well organized and well written with almost no spelling or grammatical errors.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 17:17:23
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Liked it alot

    I really like the essay, though the personal opinions of the author are a little to strongly stated. The author introduces many facts to support his claim that do well to further the arguement. A very good, strong essay.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 16:43:27
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good Essay

    This essay was well structured and full of factual information. If someone ever needed an essay about the sexual exploits of a Roman Empress this would definitely do the trick.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 16:38:48
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Yeah, it could be better

    When the author says "In my opinion" it really turned me off, becuase I immediately feel this is the opinion of a high school student and not an expert on graffiti. The grammar and spelling are well done, which is very important. Overall it is good for high school level work.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 16:11:40
    • Score: 12 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • Strong stand made

    I like an essay where the author takes a strong and definitive stand. I doubt the author got 100% because severe is misspelled and their's no citation for the numbers he uses to make his point. It is still a very good paper overall.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 16:01:38
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Good stuff

    I enjoyed reading this well written essay. Good detail also.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 15:51:39
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting stuff

    This is was interesting to read and i thought "all men" was supposed to be only for white landowners
    • 01/01/2003
    • 15:43:06
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay...

    I was expecting the essay to be about child abuse or something. It turned out to be more of a book report. I think the title needs to be changed. If the title was changed, I would have left me more satisfied. As a book report it's very good.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 15:31:38
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Reading

    This essay was ok. I can see why the grade was only 82% because it definitely needs some proofreading. There is lack of comma pauses and organization like when the author speaks about how attached surragates can become and run off with a child, then three paragraphs later talks about the same thing.
    • 01/01/2003
    • 15:25:44
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Did you have to connect the two?

    Personally, I haven't read Animal Farm, but it seems to be a stretch trying to connect the two. One critique I have is you mentioned Napoleon the pig as the leader of the revolution but also the suppressor. If you were trying to portray the humans as the supressor you probably should have left the napoleon part out because I think it kind of confuses your argument. Overall, quality writing.
    • 17/12/2002
    • 15:54:07
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • I like the essay but, what's the source?

    I see you cited page references twice, but you never listed a works cited section. It would be helpful to those researching. Otherwise an execellently written essay.
    • 17/12/2002
    • 15:40:28
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad...not great

    The information in the essay is good, but grammar and sentence structure need improvement. I don't even think "evilness" is a word. Also comma use is way off. I don't mean to be discouraging, but when you get to college grammar really counts.
    • 17/12/2002
    • 15:31:22
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well written

    I don't necessarily agree with all the arguement, but as far as the paper goes, it was well typed and presented.
    • 16/12/2002
    • 17:28:57
    • Score: 19 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
  • Corrections and comments

    I wrote this essay after a lot of research. Trust me it is a good paper. The grade was given to me by one of the hardest grading teachers in the department, so I think using "some" of the ideas from this paper would do you well. Also for some reason when I copied it, the website inserted stray question marks instead of apostrophes and some random ones. Delete them.
    • 16/12/2002
    • 17:08:12
    • Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.