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  • Thank You

    You have a lot of good points I have missed out when looking at this, thanks :)
    • 30/04/2009
    • 05:30:34
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  • Good.

    Rather good, though the conclusion perhaps needs some work.
    • 05/03/2008
    • 11:35:06
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  • Thank You

    Thank you very much for your comment.Though I must say, when writing this essay, I was working with limited sources, their were restrictions, and we were only allowed to use one book.And perhaps I was a little influenced by the teacher, who usually goes on about how the terms were unjust, and focused on the war guilt clause.And overall of course, this essay is one of opinion, based on my point of view on the fairness, it is rather biased, but it was also required.And I believe historians do think that the Treaty of Versailles was one of the triggers to World War II which lead to the rise of Hitler, so perhaps it wasn't very reasonable either.
    • 25/02/2008
    • 10:17:25
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