That's more like a paragraph. Come on, step it up!
- 27/03/2008
- 18:01:41
- Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The essay itself was not bad. It was the title I had a issue with. It doesn't match your essay. Fix the title and its all good.
- 26/03/2008
- 19:52:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I liked that you spoke the truth. I also liked the topic you chose and how you did not leave out a single detail.
- 26/03/2008
- 19:49:31
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
After I read this I felt like hugging my family, because it was very heart warming. One can bring people together with these true facts. I think you should be a writer
- 26/03/2008
- 19:47:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
It explained me everything about the Islamic religion. It even showed the similarities and differences between Islam and other religions, also how Muslims live their life
- 26/03/2008
- 19:34:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You told all the important facts, but right now this is about average. I'm sure you could make this a bit better by providing more details, but still a good essay
- 26/03/2008
- 19:27:31
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I never knew that someone can take a topic like baby food and turn it into a master piece. It was descriptive and I actually had fun reading it.
- 26/03/2008
- 19:23:41
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really liked your opening sentence. I liked how the first word was the title and you were able to tell me everything I needed to know. Good job!
- 26/03/2008
- 19:20:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a very important issue that is not often gets brought up cause of other events in the world but this is one of the best if not best essays I have read
- 27/02/2008
- 20:50:29
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is more like an assignment but still good
- 24/02/2008
- 21:20:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I liked the fact that you explained the safety concerns
- 24/02/2008
- 20:23:17
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.