User Details For: bobbyb

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  • Lots of facts

    I like how you used lots of names and then cited your sources.
    • 05/10/2008
    • 14:34:04
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Clear and Concise

    Very clear and concise essay.And an MLA bibliography too.=D
    • 06/06/2008
    • 17:28:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Its a bit short and the vocab is very limited

    Very limited vocabulary and fairly short. You could have cited some sources such as Linden Lab and people in the game. A few quotes would also be nice.
    • 12/03/2008
    • 14:50:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not much of an essay...Needs improvement

    Extremely short and they cite wikipedia as a source. You should lengthen it and find a more reliable source than wikipedia.
    • 12/03/2008
    • 14:45:57
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Too short

    It seems a bit short.
    • 10/03/2008
    • 02:59:54
    • Score: 7 out of 11 people found this comment useful.