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  • Yo

    cool essay, structured and argued creatively. Just don't agree with some of your point of views. Good essay to analyze for ToK!
    • 09/02/2004
    • 17:11:34
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice essay

    Nice essay, some very interesting and original arguments about the theme!
    • 09/12/2002
    • 09:13:07
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    This essay isn't bad, but you should concentrate more on the facts and less on you opinions; people might not relate to your personal experiences. If you're looking for more information on the subject of smoking, I recommend that you take a look at my essay, named "Should Smoking be Banned from Public places".
    • 09/12/2002
    • 09:09:28
    • Score: 19 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok...

    The language is alright, but maybe not developed enough for a Grade 10 student. Some good and original arguments, but there is much more symbology and meaning to the story
    • 09/12/2002
    • 09:01:34
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.