The goal of demonstrating "GLBT" rather than simply gay or lesbian is to show related communities. In the 1980s, it was extremely common to see bisexuals openly shunned by the gay communitiesAlso, the majority of transgender people are transsexual, which is a medical condition which has nothing to do with sexuality (some are gay some are straight). Another subset of the transgender populace is crossdressers, which are typically straight men - not gay at all.So these are wrong assumptions on your part.
- 14/11/2010
- 08:36:00
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Well-written article with great sources. Written in first-person, which is rare, and it comes off quite nicely.
- 17/04/2008
- 00:42:20
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This paper has reputable sources, is well written and discusses the pros and cons of each weight loss method. I especially like that the writer goes into detail about the negative side effects of various gastric bypass procedures (which is often overlooked in essays).
- 17/04/2008
- 00:38:23
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Doesn't seem to see the entire picture of drug use. People do wind up getting better.No sources used and the essay comes off as a rant against drug use rather than an academic look at the topic. I very much doubt that this paper received an A, especially without sources.
- 17/04/2008
- 00:34:32
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Gives a great deal of basic information about a very complex topic. The lines can often be grey when it comes to predatory lending practices, but this paper summed it p very well.In the future, you might want to remove your name from the essay though.
- 17/04/2008
- 00:09:05
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This is a good essay, but there are a few areas that don't directly follow -- they should have been arranged better. Some stilted language, but overall very good spelling and grammar. Makes the point very effectively.
- 17/04/2008
- 00:05:37
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This is a good essay for the average student. It's solid, believable, covers all of the superficial abortion debate issues in a really concise way. For a freshman/sophomore class, I'd give it a B (for mild grammar issues).
- 16/04/2008
- 23:58:37
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This is a really great essay, I hope it got an A+! It's a detailed, well-thought-out piece on pain management in the ER.
- 15/04/2008
- 19:16:06
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