I doubt a high school would give this essay an A, let alone a university. For a start, you make sweeping statements, and do not back them up with any fact or theorectical know-how. You have written an essay (badly by the way) on the description of the film! thats all it is! Not even Thames Valley Uni would accept this! God why cant people just be honest about their grades. I give this an E.Oh, and please learn that commas, allow us to lengthen our sentences. So. Rather than. Writing like. A child. You can use them and people wont think you are thick!
- 22/04/2008
- 06:21:38
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