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  • Intro correction

    Hola! Thanks for the review. I pass that movie in the store all the time and have yet to watch it. Here's a minor correction to the part "A" :"La pelicula hablaron muchos de relaciones"-- There, you are saying "The movie they spoke lots about relationships."Pelicula is singular, so it should be "la pelicula hablo (accent on the 'o') mucho de relaciones. "The movie spoke a lot about relationship". Of course There's also a better way to say it, such "the movie was about relationships" instead of saying "it spoke, talked about relationships" because isn't it a storyline? no like a documentary telling us concrete advice?"ellos no vieron al otro mucho"-- What are you saying, "they didn't see each other alot?"There's a better way to say that as well. :-)Nice review over all.
    • 12/05/2009
    • 22:19:13
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