I'm glad to see a real look at the emancipation proclamation, and one that emphasized that Lincoln did NOT want to do it. It's good to know that the facts are still present. In any case the sssay was well written, well organized, informative, and generally had a good appearance. Nice essay
- 27/08/2003
- 12:47:55
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Nice way to start the essay. I like the way you brought in the LAME marketing tactics that companies use today, although perhaps they actually think eating pizza is a prelude to participating in extreme sports. Great analysis and well organized. Keep up the good work.
- 27/08/2003
- 12:40:25
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Really liked the writing --- I'm a 3.75GPA student in 12th grade AP English and I'd use pieces of that.
- 25/08/2003
- 00:41:52
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Informative --- I guess, but a bit bland to be useable.
- 25/08/2003
- 00:37:50
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