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  • Nice Use of vocab

    You are a good writer - your sentences flow, good use of vocabulary etc. However I don't know what this has to do with Nursing Ethics and Law. I don't really understand the concept you are addressing.
    • 05/10/2008
    • 18:20:08
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    This is a little confusing, i think that you need to broaden your vocabulary and improve your linking sentences. Otherwise, well done.
    • 05/10/2008
    • 18:10:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I LIKE THE START

    but then it diminishes in interest from there, i dunno, the first 3 lines - awesome, but then i just didn't want to read anymore.... sorry
    • 01/10/2008
    • 19:30:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent Format

    the layout for this essay is excellent. I like the style of writing also.
    • 13/06/2008
    • 22:38:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting perspective

    I like your perspective, an intelligent approach.
    • 13/06/2008
    • 22:35:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.