please could you add any possible references
- 25/01/2009
- 00:29:50
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really well spirit i can obviously see u remember you're writing lessons from school this is a perfect argument, counter-argument layout with an intro and a conclusion a very neat and precise text thoroughly deserving of its super status, criticizing but i don't want to just praise this isn't just criticizing here's some feedback; maybe some statistics and references maybe a a bit more in depth explanation and variation brands for different countries could help a very well structured piece though
- 22/11/2008
- 06:54:45
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i think that this essay unlike the rest of you fearsome collection was downrated as a regular becausea)you did not use a bibliographyb)did not expand much on the Stalinist regimec)did not explain why communism was seen as a threat to capitalismi do not mean to be a critic as this was a very resourceful paper and it gave a lot knowledge it just didn't expand on the views and people which is behind everything in humanities and history
- 15/11/2008
- 01:54:30
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for clearer analysis read my attachment its easier to read than this one
- 15/11/2008
- 01:40:25
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come on i know it can't have been so good that people don't want to rate at all
- 14/10/2008
- 08:58:34
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if you read this page please could you give me a few pointers where i was good where i could have been better and how my first proper essay ever became a super
- 14/09/2008
- 15:33:03
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amazing analytic skills can't complain only praise (especially as I've never been one for analyzing literature) would have helped if you had the entire poem separately at the end
- 14/09/2008
- 09:55:08
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i agree with you and johniip but you missed a few reasons such as first person shooters like gears of war, GRAW and halo improve your multi-tasking skill- hows that gaming makes you more feminine the irony
- 14/09/2008
- 07:01:49
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.