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The Dangers of Columbine
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Lucid Dreaming
I thought this essay was excellent. I really enjoyed reading it. It gave me lots of information on the subject of lucid dreaming. I appreciate you sharing.Regards,Rachel- 26/07/2008
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I think you have potential as a writer and you have a very good writing style, however, this could use some fixing up. You've repeated in your essay the fact there was more than one sniper. You have a very great writing style and I really enjoyed reading it, just needs some editing. Keep writing!All the best to you,Rachel Stacey Paulson- 26/07/2008
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