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  • Lucid Dreaming

    I thought this essay was excellent. I really enjoyed reading it. It gave me lots of information on the subject of lucid dreaming. I appreciate you sharing.Regards,Rachel
    • 26/07/2008
    • 17:31:58
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  • Essay Feedback

    I think you have potential as a writer and you have a very good writing style, however, this could use some fixing up. You've repeated in your essay the fact there was more than one sniper. You have a very great writing style and I really enjoyed reading it, just needs some editing. Keep writing!All the best to you,Rachel Stacey Paulson
    • 26/07/2008
    • 17:02:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.