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  • Very nice

    The essay was good, I think it was a bit vague in the beginning. You could have added some.."pizazz" to it by going deeper into detail when you begin to explain things. Other than that, the general thoughts and ideas in the essay were great, just try to rethink some of the sentences and paragraph beginnings/endings.
    • 08/05/2003
    • 14:42:11
    • Score: 4 out of 10 people found this comment useful.