I think that was a very well written paper and you obviously put a lot of thought and work into this project. Punctuation is great, the writing is excellent and it seems as if you really put some extra time and effort into this paper. I never knew so much about the Chinese Automobile industry (information overload) :).Good Job
- 22/10/2008
- 06:46:15
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Hey this was a great overall paper and good job citing your sources, you have more sources than I have hairs on my head. Seriously though, that was a good read, especially the part on volunteering, great job and good luck in future essays.
- 22/10/2008
- 06:37:01
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Hey, you may want to work on the title of this paper along with a few other minor adjustments. Try to refrain from using me, my, our, you or any other word that would suggest it is opinionated. You want to keep an unbiased paper that will let your readers think for themselves. Other than that, I believe this was a good overall paper.
- 22/10/2008
- 06:33:29
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Hey, this was a really nice article. I agree with most of what you have to say, but until we get the alternative fuels, we need to stick with what we have. I know in the next few years, we are going to need to work on alternative fuels and I wish we could kill off fossil fuels now, but unfortunately, that would cripple our economy even more. All in all, great article.
- 21/10/2008
- 17:08:46
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