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  • Good Format

    Good format.
    • 23/10/2008
    • 09:00:16
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  • Decent

    Your paper has no flow. It feels like the first and last paragraph were written separate from the body.
    • 23/10/2008
    • 08:35:31
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  • Good

    Delve into the opposing argument in more detail. To strengthen your argument you should explain why the opposition believe what they do.
    • 23/10/2008
    • 07:57:45
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