This essay explores some good ideas but a bit more effort and length is required for a piece of creative writing
- 02/11/2008
- 19:55:53
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This is essay is pretty good at answering the question as it did not deviate from the question unlike other essays
- 02/11/2008
- 19:52:58
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This essay while it might have good information on the factual side, it does not have structure e.g intro, opening statements and conclusions.As a set of notes it may be worthwhile
- 02/11/2008
- 19:48:22
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This essay rather a report on Bulgaria is very brief and general, for an undergraduate student at college.It would have been better if there was more information on different aspects of Geography such as the physical geography, the spatial geography, the cultural geography, he political geography and such so.
- 31/10/2008
- 14:48:55
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All in all a well done essay, but a bit short on length and to the point.A few more examples of belonging would have helped the essay a lot.Just a personal question- is this for the Australian HSC, if it is it should be a lot longer and make use of at least 2 related texts on the concept of belonging.
- 29/10/2008
- 00:00:46
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