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Essay List

• Illegal Immigration into America

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• The Harms of Affirmative Action

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• The Impact of Community Service

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• Positives of Indian Gaming

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Comments List

• Good essay

  Good writing skills. Pretty good structure... good attention getterBut needs a better thesis... more information in paragraphs .. and a stronger conclusionbut overall a good essay
  • 22/12/2008
  • 06:24:23
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• Good essay

  Good: topic sentences and lots of informationnegative: Intro to long... weak attention getter.... thesis should be at the end describing what your whole essay will be based off of... little stronger conclusionbut overall good essay
  • 22/12/2008
  • 06:19:38
  • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.