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  • This is Great.

    Great! Well written essay for sure. Could you add a bibliography though? I would like to see what sources you used.
    • 09/05/2009
    • 23:24:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay Job.

    This essay does not seem to flow very well. It does not clearly have a certain, distinctive theme. However, I do see some of your key points. You did a good job analyzing the book.
    • 08/05/2009
    • 18:57:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Job.

    This topic is so creative. I especially liked your interpretation of it as well. I checked out the sources that you used and all of them are great and informative. Excellent job. Keep it Up.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 15:13:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Keep it Up!

    This is very creative. I really enjoyed your unique writing style. I definitely liked reading this.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 15:12:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Don't Do This:

    Don't submit essays twice for extra points. It's just cheap and inappropriate.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 15:10:58
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job!

    A bibliography would be great. This has much information and I definitely like the grammar and flow of the writing.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 15:09:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • NO

    What? This is just copied and pasted from a blog... This is such a bad effortless way to gain points. Don't ever submit this stuff like this again.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 15:04:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Thesis - Just Needs Evidence

    This is very short and you definitely could have used more examples to back up your very clearly defined thesis.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 15:01:41
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Poor Job.

    Why would you even try to submit this? Next time submit material that you actually put your effort in...
    • 25/03/2009
    • 14:58:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Mediocre Job

    This is creative, yet at the same time the topic of this story is trite and almost uninteresting.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 14:56:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • No.

    The title says it all... =/. These are just random notes pieced together.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 14:42:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job

    Who would give this negative ratings? I checked out your sources. They are all great! This is well-written as well as well-researched. Bravo!
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:28:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done

    Very well written. One can tell from your bibliography that you used outstanding sources. The structure was there and so was the grammar. Everything was perfect!
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:27:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • For the Future:

    This was submitted twice for extra points. In the future do not do this again or the essays will be removed.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:26:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Mediocre

    This has poor sentence structure and grammar. The information is all there, though.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:25:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    This is great. You definitely covered every aspect of this topic! A job well done =]
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:24:44
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Improvement

    This is a very broad topic.. obviously your essay could use some improvement. Looking at the length alone should show the lack of effort you have put in.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:14:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Study Notes

    Please keep in mind when rating this that it is study notes.
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:11:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Dreamadream

    dreamadream - I'm the writer of these notes and of the previous comment (in which i added the bibliography i forgot)
    • 25/03/2009
    • 00:04:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Bibliography for these Study Notes

    Bibliography for these Study Notes:Chemistry: Matter and Changeby: Dingrando
    • 23/03/2009
    • 16:12:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Bibliography

    Bibliography:Chemistry: Matter and Changeby: Dingrando
    • 23/03/2009
    • 16:12:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Eh.

    It was an okay story. I felt it could have been expanded.
    • 19/03/2009
    • 11:26:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Revision is Necessary

    There is overall, basic information in here. There is no apparent thesis and there is a total lack of organization. This could use much improvement.
    • 14/03/2009
    • 19:46:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Job Well Done

    The writing style is great and all of the necessary information and facts are there. Excellent work!
    • 14/03/2009
    • 19:45:01
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Thorough

    This has so much information in it. Its a great topic which you've expanded on greatly. It really needs a bibliography, though.
    • 14/03/2009
    • 19:44:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty Good

    A Bibliography would be good. Its hard to see how this got accepted without one when you obviously used outside sources.
    • 14/03/2009
    • 19:43:44
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A Suggestion - Good Start

    I agree with the last comment. It really seems like you are just summarizing and analyzing the movie. I think you should take this essay to the next level by connecting your points to the general theme of pop culture.
    • 09/03/2009
    • 22:20:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • See Comment.

    Please keep in mind when rating these notes that they are STUDY NOTES... not an essay.I have correctly categorized them as so.
    • 02/03/2009
    • 12:53:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Poor Job

    Way too short, especially for the topic and the great source used.
    • 01/03/2009
    • 22:59:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Job

    This is great, especially for an 8th grader. Some spelling errors though, but none too big.
    • 01/03/2009
    • 22:59:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    The conclusion was pretty good. I like your source. =]
    • 01/03/2009
    • 22:57:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • This is Pretty Good.

    I gave it a green smiley, although there were some spelling errors. Try sticking with one tense as well. The length was good and it was a good essay overall.
    • 01/03/2009
    • 22:57:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    you definitely have a lot of evidence and its a very informative paper
    • 01/03/2009
    • 22:55:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job

    Woah wtf to the last comment. Anyways, this is a solid paper
    • 28/02/2009
    • 22:35:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I'm an Atheist as well.

    I love this. I agree with all of your points.
    • 28/02/2009
    • 22:34:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • See Comment.

    Next time don't submit it twice for more points. Good job though.
    • 17/02/2009
    • 16:46:19
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Another one that's plagiarized

    Guess you can't do any of your own work can you?
    • 17/02/2009
    • 16:43:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • IM REPORTING THIS >.>

    Not only did you plagiarize it.. its a crap essay.
    • 17/02/2009
    • 16:39:39
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nooo

    Everyone please report this. PLAGIARIZED! Please do not submit things just for the points...
    • 17/02/2009
    • 16:32:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • PLAGIARIZED

    you suck. http://www.gradesaver.com/ClassicNotes/Authors/about_john_steinbeck.html
    • 17/02/2009
    • 16:30:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    You should have included Retinitis Pigmentosa. It is a rare vision disease that leads to the reduction of peripheral vision to tunnel vision. It is well researched, but if you include some of the rarer ones, for which there are no cure, people will be more aware.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 20:19:30
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • F? more like B-

    How come you got an F? Sure, it's fairly short but it is well-written and has great evidence.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 11:21:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty Good

    You should apply hubris to another book. Say for example - The Odyssey, which has many references to it. This would help strengthen your essay with more evidence. It is fairly adequate as it is right now.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 11:20:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Poor

    This is driven by emotion and has a huge bias. I don't know how any teacher would give this ridiculous and ludicrous essay an A+... Do you have any scientific proof that a baby is alive when it is a fetus? I think not. You know nothing about this topic.. you just follow the religious propaganda and for that I would give you a C+. It was a decent rant but by no means should anyone be persuaded by your "argument"
    • 10/02/2009
    • 21:10:01
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Eh...

    Why are all your essays one paragraph? I do not think I even need to mention Spark Notes...Also, use the literary present throughout.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 18:33:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay Job

    It seems that all of your book reports are taken directly from Spark Notes. Have you actually handed these in for class? Plagiarism would be a definite question. Also, at least put the effort in to split it up into different paragraphs.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 18:32:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Mediocre

    There are many different themes in Animal Farm that you have not covered here. It seems that it is all taken from Spark Notes, but it's an okay job.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 18:31:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • It Explores the Topic and Expands

    Very well written. Definitely A+ material.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 18:29:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Interesting Topic

    This is a great topic and you really explored all the aspects of it and gave great detail. The writing style is great as well.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 18:28:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • The Poor Writing Style Takes Away So Much From the Essay

    I agree with the last comment. It's not a very compelling essay.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 18:27:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Help Please

    Does anyone know why it formatted like this (even though I didnt submit it this way)?
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:33:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Content is very bad.

    THis is very poorly written.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:32:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • WRONG PLACE

    How did they actually accept this...This is stupid and pointless. Please use correct spelling and grammar next time.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:31:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • NOOOOO

    THIS IS HORRIBLE. This should not be on here. How did it even get accepted?
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:30:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Disgusting

    Don't post this stuff ever again.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:29:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • This is a disgusting story about incest.

    Do me a favor and never post these stories on this website again...
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:27:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • HORRIBLE

    This should not be on this website.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:23:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Inappropriate.

    This should not be on this site.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:22:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • No evidence.

    Not only is there no evidence, but this is extremely biased as by your religion. Abortion is illegal after 6 weeks... and that's true with what you are saying. You've said nothing about the legality before those 6 weeks. This essay is bad.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:21:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • You have NO EVIDENCE.

    I completely disagree with you. I think you should stop dissing other people's culture.. like now.
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:18:39
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Get a LIfe.

    This just seems like you're complaining. I had them twice... for 1 year both times. I've gone through greater ordeals than braces....
    • 08/02/2009
    • 13:17:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay.

    The grammar and spelling is off. It has a lot of emotion, but doesn't really reveal anything new to the reader. I gave you a yellow face.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:23:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Creative

    Nice job. I liked it.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:22:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Just for Points - should not be on this website

    This is just an IM conversion.... This is nothing and has no meaning. Notice that its in the subject Chemistry... obviously this person submitted it just for the points.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:21:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay Job

    The essay is okay. I would like to see more evidence, though. Also, "analisis" is spelled analysis. Just so you know =P
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:20:11
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • This is Not Appropriate.

    I dont see the point to this at all.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:15:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • You suck.

    This is all plagiarized. Nice job, idiot.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:12:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Poem.

    I like the poem a lot. It shows a lot of frustration and emotion. The title seems a bit cliche, unfortunately.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:11:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Different but Okay

    It's okay. The profanity is a bit much though.
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:05:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Essay

    I totally agree. I'm an atheist. All religions are corrupt
    • 07/02/2009
    • 15:01:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Too Short

    The spacing is so that he can actually submit his essay. (It's too short.)
    • 05/02/2009
    • 19:56:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Study Notes

    Please keep in mind that these were study notes for my test on this topic.
    • 31/01/2009
    • 11:15:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • =/

    You submitted this twice... for extra points?
    • 11/01/2009
    • 11:16:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok for study notes

    Keir, these are study notes...
    • 09/01/2009
    • 11:06:44
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow..

    This is not a fairly researched essay at all... look at your bibliography. Your paper is blatantly one sided and poorly written. Your sources are all from the religious point of view. Maybe you should try the scientific and learn the truth
    • 09/01/2009
    • 01:20:11
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • STUDY NOTES - SORRY

    These are study notes, sorry I meant to put that in the category section.
    • 08/01/2009
    • 14:45:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • STUDY NOTES

    These are study notes, sorry I put the wrong category.
    • 08/01/2009
    • 14:44:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • No.

    You should really try to have a thesis or something. It seems very unorganized and has no information in it.
    • 01/01/2009
    • 07:31:29
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • HORRIBLE

    Okay you are sick. This should not have gotten accepted. This is trash. Wow and you definitely don't have a Ph.D. God stop writing, like now.
    • 01/01/2009
    • 07:29:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    You should try to back your points up by quotes from the short story. And also, try to make your righting have more flow to it.
    • 01/01/2009
    • 07:26:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Creative - But Spell Check

    Maybe you're very young or something. That's all I can say about these spelling errors (and few grammar errors). But its very creative and definitely follows along with what the characters in Jimmy Neutron would say.
    • 01/01/2009
    • 07:24:10
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Great

    This doesn't seem like a very well worded or flowing essay to me. The content was dull. The tone was very off and distant. The grammar was horrible. Try to revise and read over your essay.
    • 01/01/2009
    • 07:01:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay Job

    You over-simplified complex issues here. Try digging deeper into the research. Also, a bibliography would be good.
    • 01/01/2009
    • 07:01:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Contradiction-Great Essay Though

    You mention that there is only one difference between homosexual and heterosexual people, yet you say that we should not be looking at differences. That seems a little conflicting. Its still a great essay, though! Good job. You had some really good points in there.
    • 31/12/2008
    • 19:32:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I admire you

    This is a very unique, hard situation to be in. I hope that one day you will strongly side with one decision over the other. I am glad that you are a parent that keeps the best interests of her child in mind. This is great and we need more people like you in this world. Thank you. =]
    • 31/12/2008
    • 19:23:51
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Job

    This is a great essay. It is backed by scientific knowledge and proof. Your sources are also very good. I used them for my project, too. Thanks!
    • 31/12/2008
    • 19:14:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done

    Anorexia is a major problem for many teenagers going through it. This essay contains a good analysis of the psychological and physical factors. I also think that the sources you used were very factual and reliable
    • 31/12/2008
    • 15:27:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Research

    This is a good essay. Thank you for including your bibliography. I am doing a powerpoint on this topic, and am going to use your source <http://lookwayup.com/free/organic.htm>. Great job!
    • 19/12/2008
    • 14:32:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    You obviously deserved that A+. Just by looking at your bibliography, I can see the extent of the research that you conducted. The essay is very detailed and you have a clear thesis that is backed up by many points. I especially like the background information that you gave on Bush; it really helps the reader have context to the essay.
    • 14/12/2008
    • 15:02:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.